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This immediately sets a sharp, tense rhythm, especially with the clock and the methodical way Jack prepares himself. The paranoia feels earned, not dramatic, and the idea of knowledge itself triggering danger makes the threat feel uncomfortably modern.

At this moment, is Jack more afraid of being watched, or of being right about why his father died?

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